英语写作修改:Adversity - 逆境的意义

原文:

The cartoon aims at informing us of the significance of adversity. Definitely,No one can deny the importance of adversity. Adversity is conducive to people’s growth and maturity. By facing adversity with confidence and a brave heart, people are more likely to recognize themselves profoundly, bring their potential into full play and accumulate more experiences. To further illustrate the significance of adversity, I would like to take an empirical evidence as a case in point: surveys conducted by some biographers have demonstrated that almost all of the great men and celebrities have built their mansion of success on the bedrock of adversity.

修改:

The cartoon tells us about the value of adversity. Surely, no one can deny the importance of adversity, which plays an important role in our growth and maturation. By facing adversity with courage and confidence, we can learn more about ourselves, bring our potential into full play, and accumulate experience. To understand the point better, consider this: studies conducted by biographers show that almost all accomplished men and women built their mansion of success on the bedrock of adversity.

说明:

Aims at informing us of,对,复杂。Definitely, no one can - definitely表示确定的事实,surely在这里是设想。Maturity是成熟的状态,maturation是成熟的过程,与growth并列。Recognize themselves profoundly不通,profoundly - 意义深远地。To further illustrate the significance of adversity, I would like to take an empirical evidence as a case in point,太罗嗦,empirical evidence字也太了。Surveys conducted by some biographers,其实大概不是传记作者搞的什么调查或研究,survey,studies之类都是社科的人搞,跟传记作者没啥关系,传记作者就是讲故事。mansion of success on the bedrock of adversity,不知道是不是根据中文的说法发明的,bedrock of adversity这说法有点儿奇怪,姑妄存之。

原文:

From my perspective, at no time should we underestimate the power of adversity. Furthermore, when coming across adversity, we should not regard it as a obstacle to success; instead, we might as well envision it as a precious chance to improve ourselves, fight against it courageously and acquire wisdom from it. “Adversity breeds success.” An ancient Greek philosopher also once said.

修改:

As I see it, at no time should we underestimate the power of adversity. When we find outselves in an adverse situation, we should not regard it simply as an obstacle to success; we might as well take the occasion as an valuable opportunity to test and improve ourselves. We should fight against the adversity with guts and emerge from the battle wiser stronger. As a philosopher of ancient Greece once said: “Adversity breeds success.

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